Hi Laurence,
Wow, it's great writing; to the point, full of self deprecating humour, vivid imagery and powerful introspection. Fucking hell, back in 87 i didn't know you were so at war with yourself. Thank christ your suicidal endeavours were so humourously incompetent. Keep on with it.
All best,
Al

Hi Laurence,
How goes? The last piece you sent was just like the first, very immediate and full of very filmic imagery and obviously candid experiences powerfully told.
Al

Hi Laurence,

Hope all well and staying safe during Lockdown shitshow number 3.  You're writing is brilliant, latest story continuing with terse dialogue, economical, taking us on an enlightening, revelatory journey, all in the space of a page and a half of a4.  It's also fucking funny and at times sinister.  Love the anecdotal nature and the punk playlist :-)  If you retain this diary format style, I reckon you could write a whole book.  Wow, did you really get your diploma?  Freud was always fucked up!

All best,

Al

Cheers Laurence, keep writing mate it's quality believe me!
Al

A lot of writers wouldve spent a whole chapter just explaining their predicament, which is boring you dont, you cut to the chase and explain via immediate experience with a candid, wry down to earth voice.
Al

31/03/22

17/12/22